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Anyone Who Could Help Me To Correct My Personal Statement? Thank You!!!?
1 Comment | Posted by Brand McNaut in Brand Management
Dear professor
My name is ***, a student of ****** My personality is bright and be good at communication with others. I am a sports fan in the daily life and like all kinds of sports. I was study “Project Management” major in the university. To choose this profession is because I am very interested in culture. Owing to I know that every classic building must have a unique cultural background. The main task of “Project Management” is coordinating projects in each sector cooperation and liaison. Its high demands ability to organize and coordinate .the study in the university is a good upgrade on my personal qualities .
I have come to realize that your school is a university with long tradition and history. The course I want to apply to is “International Corporate Media”, I believe this course will be an hot subject in the future. As in an era with speedy flow of information, a corporation needs an excellent public image. This also ensures the safe and sustained development of a corporation. Media is the “communicator” “loudspeaker”, an initiator for the corporation to go to the market place, at the same time, it is also a propeller. Modern competitions are not competitions of products, price, services, but competitions of brands, company reputations and cultures. Company image and brand depend much on the media’s support. I think that the “Project Management” and ” International Corporate Media ” had the same in nature because they both based on the development of coordination and culture for survival. “Building” and “corporation” is the starting point for the culture, then “management” and “media” are raised their respective cultural by organize and coordinate. I love knowledge of corporate structural communication and marketing operations. In the days of studying and working, I challenge myself to think and sharpen my mind, I believe these qualities are going to help me succeed in the studying of ” International Corporate Media ” .
I hope the above statements will help you know more about me, I was a mature and resourcefu1 person who with high sense of responsibility .A person with dream, A person who love challenges. I hope with this chance, with my hard working, I will be able to have my next self-surpassing coming. Thank you.
1 Comment for Anyone Who Could Help Me To Correct My Personal Statement? Thank You!!!?
easel | February 9, 2010 at 8:38 pm
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My name is ***, a student of ****** .I am stronghly interested in”Project Management” and would like to be considered for your University. I have a strong interest in culture as it relates to arcitecture.background. The main task of “Project Management” is coordinating projects in each sector cooperation and liaison. Its high demands ability to organize and coordinate .the study in the university is a good upgrade on my personal qualities .
Your University itself, which has its own unique history, would be a priviledge to attend. The course I want to apply to is “International Corporate Media”, I believe this course reflects future demands and needs for the future. As in an era with speedy flow of information, a corporation needs an excellent public image. This also ensures the safe and sustained development of a corporation. Media is the “communicator” “loudspeaker”, an initiator for the corporation to go to the market place, at the same time, it is also a propeller. Modern competitions are not competitions of products, price, services, but competitions of brands, company reputations and cultures. Company image and brand depend much on the media’s support. I think that the “Project Management” and ” International Corporate Media ” had the same in nature because they both based on the development of coordination and culture for survival. “Building” and “corporation” is the starting point for the culture, then “management” and “media” are raised their respective cultural by organize and coordinate. I love knowledge of corporate structural communication and marketing operations. In the days of studying and working, I challenge myself to think and sharpen my mind, I believe these qualities are going to help me succeed in the studying of ” International Corporate Media ” .
I am a person who loves challenges, sports and the advent of tecknology. I thank you for my consideration in realizing my dreams.
This is my suggestion: Less is more and less pats on your own back. They will see your personality.